Are we there yet? on New Flesh

Hey all. Its been a little while since I updated this site, largely because I have been stuck inside of my novel and didn’t really have anything more interesting to say than – “did another 1000 words today”.
I do, however, have a few nasty little flash fiction stories that have not been published. The first of these – Are we there yet? is published today on The New Flesh Magazine.
I originally wrote this for a competition on 10Flash, but just didn’t finish it in time. Its a simple story about a man, his daughters and the open road…oh yeah, and some smoke demons that are chasing them.
I was going for a feel of barely contained panic and building terror with this one. Let me know if you think I managed it.

Anyway, the link to the story is HERE

Hope you like it.

~ by graemereynolds on September 2, 2010.